The second volume summarizes the
story of the young man wearing a thin green shirt, riding a horse and leaning on a leaning bridge, with red sleeves and red sleeves all over the building.
In fact, there is something wrong with this assassin. In fact, it is just a free-spirited martial arts story. As long as the writing is good, it can play some martial arts jokes that I like.
For example, I really like the plot about Ashina's swordsmanship being the best in the world.
Strictly speaking, the first and second volumes combined are the first story of this novel.
From the beginning, there were only two or three kittens and puppies in Xiaohun Inn, and then we met more and more people, and the team began to grow stronger.
This story begins with Ning Huaiyuan, a renegade disciple of the Huashan Sect, and ends with Ning Huan, the supreme elder of the Luo Sect.
Fang Bie and Xue Ling's hive levels will also be upgraded from Carpenter Bee to Silver Bee.
Although it has not reached it yet, it will be reached in the next volume.
From beginning to end, I was quite happy writing this volume. It was just like what I originally thought, which was to simply write about everyone’s Jianghu story. At the end of this volume, I ended up with the character Ning Huan, and that’s it. That’s all.
Next, let me talk about a few points. Although I don’t want to say them, I will say them anyway.
The first was the chapter about the agreement, which immediately caused an explosion of feedback from readers. That is, Fang Bu made an agreement with Ning Xia that if Ning Huan arrived too early, Ning Xia would step in and ask Ning Huan to take her away.
This is actually a preventive agreement. From the way of writing the novel, if Ning Xia is not allowed to take Ning Huan away at this time, there will be no way to end it.
First of all, Fang Bie would not be willing to take action in such a public place. Secondly, as you can see from the final duel, in fact, Fang Bie tried his best to fight with Ning Huan, but he was only 70% to 30%.
This was still the case when Ning Huan didn't understand Fang Bie's moves at all, and Fang Bie had already used Heiwu, Duanwu and Shang Jiuge to almost see through Ning Huan's underwear.
You all say it's unreasonable when the protagonist takes out a gun, but is it great that the protagonist, after ten years of training, can instantly kill Ning Huan, a big demon who has almost no weaknesses after seventy years of training?
I don't quite understand.
It is said that steady writing is not invincible writing, and even now that this book is written, it is no longer strictly steady writing.
Because Fang Bi's character has almost been written out. He likes to make plans before taking action, and he prefers to hide his trump cards before taking action. He doesn't like to show off his power in front of others. And when do you have Fang Bi's swordsmanship that is more advanced than Shang Jiuge's? I had the misconception that Shang Jiuge was the number one in swordsmanship stamped by Fang Bie himself, and he would never fight her.
Fang Bi's sword is the real sword for killing people. What he pursues is the impeccable, fastest and most accurate sword technique. This kind of sword technique can restrain any kind of martial arts in the world. Even Ning Huan was cut down twenty-nine times in a row. Return a hand.
These all have hints and settings.
As for the gun, I only want to talk about two points. The first point is that when he killed the red fox after the Dragon King's gathering, Fang Bu fired a shot. Later, during the Shang Jiuge incident in Luocheng, Fang Bu took the lead in killing Yun Zhong Lei Yun. Mom, Yun Niang is also a professional hand grenade user. Besides, the background of this novel is such an obvious dynasty. In this era, Fran cannons are all over the sea.
Second, after Fang Bie came to this world, it was normal for him to try to use the resources of the hive to make guns under the premise that there was no way to quickly achieve martial arts. A flintlock device, rifling, paper-packed fixed ammunition, and granular black Gunpowder is difficult to make on a large scale. Is it difficult to make it by hand in a small workshop?
If you find it difficult, think about it first. No matter how many martial arts secrets you have read in the past ten years, this one should be more difficult.
Fang Bie is not a poor person. He is the only disciple of Jade Bee He Ping and can enjoy the best resources of the entire hive.
On the one hand, it is the author's thinking from the setting, and on the other hand, it is the progress of the plot development.
From the plot point of view, Ning Xia must be taken away, just like Xu Zhu must solve the Zhenlong chess game in Tian Long Ba Bu, and Mu Wanqing must suddenly become wise and run away and be caught by Duan Yanqing and imprisoned in a stone house to feed Yin and Yang and reunite. These are When the author was writing the plot, I could only try not to give in to shit and be logically reasonable, because at that time, don’t take action and directly expose your trump card in front of tens of thousands of people in Los Angeles, don’t hide the strength of Tiehan for so long. All the idiots are exposed. Let's watch together. Don't you think Ning Huan should be hacked? Is it possible that we can’t beat him in the end?
Besides, Ning Xia does have this latter part of the plot, which is that Ning Huan has to tell her personally why he chose her as the cauldron, otherwise Ning Huan would be stupid and just cultivate a Ning Xia, and deliberately put Ningxia forced rebellion. As I said many times before, if Ning Huan really uses Ningxia as a furnace, then Ningxia is willing. After all, the grace of upbringing and teaching is there.
In addition, Ning Huan's crisis needs to be used to describe the reaction of Jin Yiwei and Feng Chao. Feng Chao was forced to lower his face and ordered An Fang and He Ping to kill Ning Huan and solve the crisis in Luo City at this time.
It's all interconnected.
The author looks at the whole when writing, and must sacrifice the rationality of the parts for the sake of the whole.
I know that most of you will not take the path of writing, but in fact, writing is really a difficult thing that requires continuous learning.
I can also simply say this, I am still learning and exploring, and I cannot write a perfect story, but I am willing to present to you the best story I can write.
And I can confidently say that this is indeed my best level, and I may improve in the future.
But now this is my level.
Above, as for the next story, I may temporarily leave the stage of Los Angeles and go to other places. This is also a story that I actually want to write.
The prototype is the Southeast Anti-Japanese Meow!
For those readers who really hate my plot and feel that it is as messy as a sieve, collapsed into a mess, and the characters have no character.
Welcome to my book friend group for private chat and I will correct you in person.
If I post them in the comments or in this chapter, I will delete most of them in the end.
Because I think most readers will read quietly.
By the way, book club account.
General group: 232940815
V group: 904562558 (V group is thin, so it’s okay if you don’t come. You need the value of fans.)
Let’s see you in the next volume.
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